Hi I just thought I'd post one of my stories here. It's the one that I'm most concerned about finishing, and the one that I hope to one day publish. I know that it reads kind of like a rough draft (spelling and grammer mistakes etc) but I will be re-posting it later once I've revised it and added on some chapter. Constructive critisism is greatly appreciated.
Title: Lacerated Heart (change will be made to it later on)